Have to say, those are awesome works there. And you say you can't write. :) *hugs Dawn*
I love the first one because you showed the consequence of one of Ash's flaws. Just because he can defeat Jessie and James doesn't mean he can defeat the other Rockets. That and yeah, he needs to learn to get out while he still can. -_-
Second one it's interesting you have TR using guns, though a test subject is the one that is doing the shooting. I also like the theory you mentioned because to me Team Rocket has great potential with holding captives and violence. There's a criminal organizational, after all.
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Date: 2010-07-16 05:51 pm (UTC)I love the first one because you showed the consequence of one of Ash's flaws. Just because he can defeat Jessie and James doesn't mean he can defeat the other Rockets. That and yeah, he needs to learn to get out while he still can. -_-
Second one it's interesting you have TR using guns, though a test subject is the one that is doing the shooting. I also like the theory you mentioned because to me Team Rocket has great potential with holding captives and violence. There's a criminal organizational, after all.
Again, great job there! :3 *hugs*