I feel meh.

[rosejailmaiden]

So, it's been the Week From Hell at school this week. I've had nothing but projects and tests. Consequently, I haven't been able to finish RP chapter four. And Lily, I need your opinion about my chapters. I don't know if you could really give me a decent opinion here... but am I writing Giovanni's dialogue too elliptically? Because I was reading through what I managed to get done of the prologue, and the standard line for him lately is something like 'Now, Jonathon...die!" Or, you get the idea. I know that this is something little, but I'm really worried that this might be OOC, since he doesn't really speak elliptically on the show.

Why am I even worrying about this?
...meh.

Comments

[lilypeters.livejournal.com]

To be honest...I don't keep track of Giovanni's speech style at all. ^_^; Write him in a manner that suits you.

~Lily~

[nekusagi.livejournal.com]

Thanks.
It's just that the elliptical made him sound all contemplative and profound. About murder.